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Fail background / color is fail.

Gift art goes out to :iconpracticaluses:! It's of his characters Rick cressen and his sister Dani Cressen. He really doesn't want to hurt her... too bad she doesn't feel the same way :<


:worship: Sorry it took me forever to finish! D: :worship:

Characters are (C) :iconpracticaluses:
Art = :iconriyami:

Ri brain is fail X3
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If you don't like the background/color, why not change it? I would have gone for a warm color, myself, given the emotions of the image (or...just the girl, really. That's not the face of someone who's being attacked by his own sister and doesn't want to hurt her, that's the face of someone mildly irritated by unfunny cartoons at 4AM. His sister, in contrast, is wonderfully expressive.).

I like how the hair texturing works on Rick, but it doesn't work so well for Dani. It just...doesn't look like hair. In addition, I would make both of their hair less busy, removing or modifying many of the stray locks such as the top three on Rick's head and the weird one sticking out of his ponytail, and Dani's lock directly across from her nose. The hair framing her face could stand to be consolidated as well.

I'm...not sure what's going on with the foreshortening of Rick's right arm, or what it's holding, or how it's holding it. Coloring in general seems sort of half-done; there's nothing really striking about any of the shading or highlights. You could also stand to vary your line thickness a bit more.

Oh, and welcome back! :bucktooth: