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©2009 ~Riyami
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Alien Character Entry for my very first OCT :iconriseoct: :D

I like how she turned out :) and I may use her outside of the OCT. Hell I don't even know how far I'll go even if I do make it in, but I know I'll have fun.

Please let me know if you see any spelling errors or the like. use the colored parts for references if you draw her... they look better >.>

Critique encouraged :)

On to the audition!
Page 1: [link]
Page 2: [link]

-edit- Fixed a few typos.
Added Height / Weight
Thanks everyone for any and all feedback!

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:icontengoku:
I figured out what weirded me out about her head tentacle. It's the angle. XD The way it's drawn, for some reason, makes it look like it's angled toward the viewer instead of following her body's angle in the image.

But! I like her. You have me wanting to draw Valyra and my squidthing. ...And a 'taur-esque alien. Damnit, stop appealing to my sci-fi love. D:

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Does Tenny have to flog a bitch?

Lumiva will own your soul.
:iconbunnygirle26:
Oh wow I love her she is so awesome!!!!!!! Good luck on Rise

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Say hi to me. . .. do eeeet
:iconkansheera:
I looooove complete looking reff sheets. Lovelovelovelove.

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Please visit my gallery! I've got tea and crumpets! :please:

The male counterpart - ~warbanana
The long lost sister - *miss-meemo
The invader from outer space - ~Boonide
:iconidk-throwaway:
Typos: "Weaknesses: Reactive shietld"
"giving an almost 0 deree turn radius"

Totally digging the expressions there. Like the shading on them, too.

Do the feet have a wraparound grip like a bird? :?
:iconsinkato:
The SRS BSNS FACE makes me lol. XD

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:iconriyami:
Thanks for pointing those out! It sucks because I have to copy the text over to firefox or word to have it spell checked and then paste the edited text back into photoshop. (I know there's already a spell check feature in photoshop but it crashes my program when I try to use it :( )

And lol, I edited a typo with a typo in Shield.

Her feet can't grip strong as a bird, but they do have more traction on surfaces due to her claws and "thumb-toes".

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My honor student can beat up your honor student.
--"Knowledge is half the battle! Violence is the other."--
:iconriyami:
Thanks, it's my first attempt at an OCT but I'm so ready to go!

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My honor student can beat up your honor student.
--"Knowledge is half the battle! Violence is the other."--
:iconriyami:
:iconnouplz:

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My honor student can beat up your honor student.
--"Knowledge is half the battle! Violence is the other."--
:iconriyami:
Indeed!

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My honor student can beat up your honor student.
--"Knowledge is half the battle! Violence is the other."--

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